Last night I completed the 4 week Writing Class and during these 4 weeks we focused on the 5 senses, writing various descriptions and exercises all relating to sights, sounds, tastes, touch, and smells. It was great fun. I was encouraged, learning from my peers, enjoying the assignments and then it was over. I have included my last assignment, "write a short story encompassing the 5 senses." And since today is Five Senses Friday, I thought it would be fun to share my venture into writing with you.
Deep
in sleep after another restless night, I hear something buzzing. It is an unpleasant sound with it’s constant noise. The alarm clock did it’s job, it woke me out
of my deep and dream-filled sleep. I lay
in bed momentarily so snug underneath the many layers of blankets thinking of
the day ahead, and already planning an afternoon nap due to the lack of
sleep. I can hear the soft hum of the
furnace as it converts the night-time chill into daytime comfort. “Time to get
up”, I say to Toby as he remains stretched out in complete comfort at the foot
of the bed. I grab the bathrobe from the
back of the door, snuggling my feet into my pink slippers that sit bedside, feeling
their softness as they envelop my feet with their warmth I hear a soft thud as Toby jumps from his
spot on the bed on to the carpet. Running quickly down the stairs he waits
patiently for me to open the front door to let him out for his morning inspection
of the yard. He can’t miss his morning
inspection, verifying that nothing has wandered into his kingdom that would
need immediate removal by chasing.
Opening
the front door I feel a cold blast of air and spot tiny flakes of snow
beginning to accumulate on the walkway. Kingdom inspection takes some time so I begin the
everyday ritual of preparing my morning coffee, filling the carafe with the exact
amount of water and 4 scoops of freshly ground beans. Almost
immediately I hear it’s dripping sound delivering with it a waft of the
familiar smell of fresh made java.
Returning
upstairs to dress, I reach for the shower faucet, adjusting the knobs so the
hot water will begin flowing shortly. A
warm shower early in the morning cleanses both my body and my mind. After
dressing I return to the kitchen, ready for that first comforting cup, my taste
buds ready to enjoy the warm, brown liquid.
Toby is sitting at the backporch door, barking, reminding me that the
kingdom is safe, inspection is complete and he is ready to return inside to a
warmer spot.
Switching
on the TV hoping to catch a weather report, I hear the newscaster,
“It
looks like it’s going to be a bad day for traveling folks. The roads will become slick and hazardous as
the snow continues to accumulate. Be
careful if you must drive, stay home if you can.”
It
is days like these that staying off the roads is an easy decision. I can remain
in my warm & cozy home because after years of driving on those hazardous
roads I am now retired. Retirement brings with it a chance to enjoy
that 2nd cup of coffee, stay home when the weather becomes perilous,
and delight in a well-deserved afternoon nap.
Still enjoying Trader Joe's flowers.....
I usually always have pics of Toby, but this very independent fat cat is my daughter's cat, Sunny. After seeing my sweetie yesterday, I stopped at my daughter's and Sunny was begging to have his portrait taken. See how well he dressed for his session?
"Remember that feeling as a child when you woke up and the morning smiled? It's time you felt like that again." ~ Taj Mahal
Until next time.......
it sounds like you have had lots of wild weather this winter. glad you can stay home & don't need to get out. this weekend is suppose to be really cold & a chance of snow. we will see. i'm so ready for spring. stay warm & i really love the cat. so cute. (:
ReplyDeleteMy five senses were very engaged as I read your short story! Evidently your artistic talent is not confined to your photography!
ReplyDeleteThe best thing about retirement is not having to go out in the elements (except to pick up granddarlings from school!) By 3:00 p.m., the weather is usually tolerable!
Lovely writing Deanna! You really did expand on all of the senses. Love this!
ReplyDeleteAlso love the flower photos and that little orange tabby. So sweet. Have a wonderful weekend, dear.
Oh Deanna,
ReplyDeleteI got lost in your words. I felt like I was there with, seeing and feeling each detail that you described. Your photography is the icing on the cake. I love your photography, and I love your writing.
Have a beautiful weekend.
Karen
Sounds like you really enjoyed your writing class. Any more classes on your agenda? I really like that paint crackled chair with the pitcher of flowers. YOu'd never know it is snowing outside with a lovely scene like that inside :)
ReplyDeleteKathy
Deanna I LOVE your second photo, it's a beauty!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet cat photo and I love the flower shots too...but I really enjoy your writing.
ReplyDeleteYour writing is so wonderful, Deanna! All the little details brought me right into your story and I could visualize everything so well. Your words were the perfect accompaniment to your pretty pictures :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I thought your writing skills were already great! Wonderfully told! My fav photo today is the chair.
ReplyDeleteIt's not one of the five senses but your posts always make my heart sing ...
ReplyDeleteFun story and love those flower shots, particularly the one on the chair. What a cool chair!
ReplyDeleteLove your story.. I always love reading what you have say. I can smell that coffee all the way over here!!
ReplyDeleteHugs, Linda
Oh, I would love to take a writing class like that! What a really fabulous job you did representing all the senses Deanna. Fabulous story and beautiful photos, I love the one of that chair, ahhhh!
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